When Night Touches Moonlight
#2When Night Touches MoonlightMoonlight sparkles a code to the dusk, enchanting him with glimpses of her softness.Sprinkled petals of pale light;portraits of the quondam rose.Her silver tones slice...
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Hi Amy,I am strictly a rhyme and meter poet (I'm an OLD guy), but I did like your poem in free verse. It is very expressive and well wrilten. I think that at only sixteen you have a great start in the...
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Amy - Like Shelby I am an inveterate rhymer and, as recently reiterated, do not feel qualified to comment on free verse. But I feel compelled to tell you that I think you have done a fine job with...
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bumping this for more viewsAnd it harm none, do thy will. Blessed Be!
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AmyI'm glad Heinzs dug into the archives andbrought back your poem.I really liked your use of musicalmetaphors.Well done and I hope you will write andpost again.Michael in Brooklyn
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